Hi, Bloggers. In literacy, we have been doing persuasive writing and we had to pick a topic. The topic that I chose was Why all kids should have a cell phone, and then we had 2 weeks to write our persuasive argument. We wrote our argument and then we had to go through it and make sure we had all punctuation correct and all capital letters in the correct places. What I used to create this piece of persuasive writing was this link here and I just changed it into my own words. So this is all I have for this week so come back next week to get a new update on my learning.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 11, 2020
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3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Kia ora Molly
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your ideas for this topic during literacy time. You make some really valid points. I agree that they are so important in emergencies. I guess deciding what age kids should have them is up for discussion also.
Fantastic ideas, ka pai! Keep up the great effort.
Ms Catton